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 ===== MARS IS BURNING =====
-//Welcome to Space, prisoner.\\
+//Welcome to Space.\\
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-//**Attention New Prisoners:** Welcome to Station Tartarus. Report to muster for cell designations in Block 9. Do not attempt to remove your collars. Do not speak to other prisoners. Recreation time begins at 7 and ends at 10 standard time, you can talk then. This is Warden Bernie Kotcheff, signing off.
+//**Attention New Prisoners!!:** Welcome to Station Tartarus. Each of you has been sentenced to reclamation labour in the Martian terraforming programs. Report to Prisoner Admin for your cell designations in Block 9. Do not attempt to remove your collars, do not speak to other prisoners and for the love of all that's holy - don't cry. Recreation time begins at 7 and ends at 10 standard time, you can talk then. This is Warden Bernie Kotcheff, signing off.
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 ==== Introduction ====
-//This game will focus on//
+//MARS IS BURNING is a game about imprisonment, teamwork and violence. The game takes place in the highest security prison of Mars during the end of the world. With your fate left in the hands of a government headed towards implosion, the game begins//
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Mars is Burning